Comic Strip Submission- Part III

Well we surely are moving on a pace as we crash into week three of my new comic strip, Tales from Toonsville, and how I go about creating a comic submission for the big five US syndicates.

This week I had a blast. Although I had already written my required 30 strips, my mind started creating more, so many in fact that some of the original 30 have now been dropped and replaced: four such samples of the 'newbies' are laid out below.

Not that there's anything wrong with the dropped strips---they can be used again--- it's just that for what I wanted to say about the comic--- its direction and writing in the initial package--- these gags fitted the bill slightly better. And if there is one thing you must do when submitting work anywhere, it's only send your absolute best.

So here we go, four more strips with their commentary. Hope you enjoy them and will wish to keep on coming back.


Stay tooned.

I know, I know, you're probably thinking 'Golfing cartoons? In this day and age! Aren't they those things that the old cartoonists did? Well yes, you are right and they did. But this new idea popped into my head. I thought of  taking the cartoon cliché and dropping it in a modern strip. It's almost like a 'How to draw cartoons the old way' type of an idea, or  'Cartoonist 101'. And anyway, Gary Larson did desert island gags in the Far Side. So if it's good enough for him then who am I to complain?

I know in my original post I said that there would be regular characters that would be used from time to time, and I even stated the four I already had. But I also said that as a proposed new comic develops it tends to morph into something a little different and Caruthers J Caruthers is a point in case. I love the old Victorian explorer tales plus the Tarzan, tales of the lost world, the endless jungle sagas and the science and experimentation and Gothic horror; plus the new Steam Punk stories. Caruthers J Caruthers just seemed like the ideal vehicle to blend History to Victorian tales, to Steam Punk, and have a laugh along the way

All I can say to this is the theme tune to the Dam-busters was ringing around my head, and being the person I am, duck images began to mix in with them and..and..well, this happened!

And finally (well, for this week anyway), here's another one of those, what-would-happen-if-a-certain-type-of-brain-was-put-into-the-Frankenstein-monster's-head gag.

My next blog post will be on Wednesday and it's a behind the scenes look at the early stages of a new cartoon print, poster and the calendar project I'm working on. And of course next Friday will be week IV of my comic strip submission series.

I sincerely hope you enjoyed this post. If you did then please share it like a demented sharing person and keep on coming back for more of the same, and a whole lot besides.

New Comic Strip Submission

Okay, so this blog is alllllllll about my life as a cartoonist, right? Right.

So in the spirit of that mission statement, I'm going to take you through my latest comic strip submission to the big five US syndicates.

Every Friday I'll be posting three or four samples of that weeks work with a little write up as to what my thinking was behind the gag, the art or both.

So here we go.

Every panel or comic strip idea submitted to the big five syndicates (King Features, United Media, Universal Press, Tribune Media and Washington Post Writers Group), require---as per their submission guideline instructions--- 30 strips, a cover letter, a CV and a character page, if needed. Once that's completed I normally mail them out to the states and then post them up on here, in their entirety, as I did with Bib and Adam & Eve.

But this time I thought it would be fun for you to follow me as I create a new idea from scratch. To hear my thoughts on the process and see how, if at all, the comic changes from my initial idea through to its eventual completion. I guess what I'm trying to say is, you get an insight into not only my working practices but my though process...worrying as that may prove to be.

If time wasn't an issue and I had a clear run at it, I could probably produce all thirty strips in a week. But because I have a lot of other commitments, I'm forced to allow myself only one day a week to work them up. And only then after I have roughed out all thirty gags in my sketch book; which can take anything up to a few weeks of snatched moments here and there.

Okay, so onto the meat and bones. The first thing I do is create a synopsis for any new feature that I'm working on. This can either be about the characters, where they live, what their views are on life; are they human, animal or something else. Most strips follow the usual formula of family, kids or animals. But any subject theme can be used so long as the newspapers readers can identify with it on some level.

Then there are the off-the-wall type comics: Far Side, Herman, Bizarro and to some degree Non Sequitur; and it is into this last genre that my new idea, Tales from Toonsville falls. And below I have written my initial working synopsis for it.

 Synopsis for Tales from Toonsville

If the cartoons lived in an actual, real and identifiable parallel universe, then ‘Toonsville would be its main hub. My cartoon is best described as a documentary of what daily life---past and present--- would be like if the world was run by the 'toons.

Although Tales from Toonsville takes a homologous and decidedly oddball look at this crazy paradox it has no set characters, but it does carry some regulars that can be visited and revisited, as and when the muse takes me. But nothing you can hang a name on. Some of these semi regular characters are as follows:

·         Granny Apple: A delightful if not heavily put upon Grandmother who never thought retirement would ever be quite like this.

·         Frankenstein: These strips are based around what would happen if a variety of brains were used on the monster and how it would affect him.

·         101 Uses for a Divorce Attorney: Not the most liked of people or professionals and most of us have come up against these antagonistic little reptiles at least once in our lives. My ideas are what I, and possibly a lot of other people, may wish to see being done to them.

·         Lilly & Jim: A married couple who not only have to deal with marriage and all of its pit falls, but have to remain optimistic and in love within a relationship that a world run by toon characters and situations throw at them.

Tales from ‘Toonsville is basically an off the wall cartoon, but one that has taken itself to the next level of off-the-wall-ish-ness.

So that said, here's four of this weeks out-put of six. Once the six week run for this feature has come to an end I will put all thirty strips up, including the ones that I didn't initially show.

I'm just too good to you.

I've always loved the anomalies that religion and the Bible throw up. I never mean to offend, I just like having a little bit of fun at the establishment. And anyway if, as the Bible says, God made us in his own likeness, he'll have a sense of humour, right?. If not, then it's the hot place for me.

The basic premise of Frankenstein, or his monster, has always been that of the brain of a convicted murder will make a murderer no matter who's body you put it into. So to have Igor---who's always getting the wrong brain, or the brain of what ever is available---bring back a kiss chase champions  plays heavily to my sense of the absurd.

Well times they are a changing. Where as the survival of the fittest has always been the norm, especially in the world of learning, nowadays with technology being king, the nerd is the new alpha male on the block. This cartoon just held up a mirror to how the new college hierarchy will be shaping up soon, if it isn't already

What can I say. He's basically a fish, right? And fishermen catch fish. It was bound to happen sooner or later. This type of cartoon also plays to my love of the old horror classics.


I sincerely hope you enjoyed this post. If you did then please share it like a demented sharing person and keep on coming back for more of the same, and a whole lot besides.